Yay! I finished making revisions to my manuscript...gave some characters last names, tidied up some minor details, and now, taking Anny Cook and Kelly Kirch's advice, I'll send it to my critique partner for her opinion! What's it about, you ask? Here's the blurb...
What happens when you discover the man you had mind-blowing sex with three months ago is your son's teacher? Tammy Saunders is horrified when she realizes the man who set her heart racing is her son's favorite teacher. With one bad relationship behind her, will she trust her heart again, or will she continue to deny her feminine side?
And is this particular teacher popular only with his students? Kevin has made some bad choices in his life, but sleeping with not only one, but now two, of his students' mothers, has got to be the worst mistake he ever made. Especially when he realizes he's lost his heart to one of them...
Hmmm. What do you think? Sound intriging? Let's hope a publisher thinks it has potential!
2 comments:
Sounds like fun! So how do you propose to fix it?
Two words: Critique partner:)
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