Wednesday, October 24, 2012

Happy Hump Day:)


Some friends and I thought it would be fun to post a snippet of a current WIP or released book every Wednesday.  Sound cool?  Here's a paragraph from my Alien-meets-Human story.  Tricia and her friends are enjoying a Girl's Night Out.  Enjoy!


Tricia and Lara, still flirting with several men, were caught up in the Electric Slide.
            Trish smiled to herself.  This was her personal favorite yardstick.  If a man could keep the dance fresh and not mechanical, he rose a notch in her favor.  But soon she became aware of a dark-haired man behind her whose gyrations intrigued her.  She managed to catch his eye and smile; soon she enjoyed moving her body with the various moves and turns.  He seemed to be intrigued with her as well.  During the final stages of the dance, he kept his eyes on her, not turning around, but drawing closer to her as their bodies undulated in invitation.
            “Can I buy you a drink?”  His voice was low and velvety.

For a complete list of participants, click here.  And since Molly's taken over the brain, since NaNo will be upon us next week, I'll only be back on Wednesdays, unless Class Reunion's cover art arrives:)

9 comments:

Jennifer Simpkins said...

This paragraph made me smile. :) Happy HDH!

Colette Saucier said...

Yes, it made me smile as well! Liked "gyrations"! ;)

kerriannecoombes said...

'Intriguing gyrations..' LOL great snippet x Happy hump day x

Kathleen Grieve said...

Ha! Loved how they kept track of each other!

Karen said...

This is hot. I'm giggling over here.

Molly Daniels said...

Thanks everyone:) Glad you like it!

Kenzie

jean hart stewart said...

18 1So much in such a little space.. loved it...

Lacie Nation said...

Sounds interesting! Loved the wording.

flossiebentonrogers.com said...

I love a velvety voice! Especially one that offers to buy a lady a drink.