Some friends and I thought it would be fun to post a snippet of a current WIP or released book every Wednesday. Sound cool? Here's a paragraph from my Alien-meets-Human story. Tricia and her friends are enjoying a Girl's Night Out. Enjoy!
Tricia and Lara, still flirting with several men, were
caught up in the Electric Slide.
Trish
smiled to herself. This was her personal
favorite yardstick. If a man could keep
the dance fresh and not mechanical, he rose a notch in her favor. But soon she became aware of a dark-haired
man behind her whose gyrations intrigued her.
She managed to catch his eye and smile; soon she enjoyed moving her body
with the various moves and turns. He
seemed to be intrigued with her as well.
During the final stages of the dance, he kept his eyes on her, not
turning around, but drawing closer to her as their bodies undulated in
invitation.
“Can I buy
you a drink?” His voice was low and
velvety.
For a complete list of participants, click here. And since Molly's taken over the brain, since NaNo will be upon us next week, I'll only be back on Wednesdays, unless Class Reunion's cover art arrives:)
9 comments:
This paragraph made me smile. :) Happy HDH!
Yes, it made me smile as well! Liked "gyrations"! ;)
'Intriguing gyrations..' LOL great snippet x Happy hump day x
Ha! Loved how they kept track of each other!
This is hot. I'm giggling over here.
Thanks everyone:) Glad you like it!
Kenzie
18 1So much in such a little space.. loved it...
Sounds interesting! Loved the wording.
I love a velvety voice! Especially one that offers to buy a lady a drink.
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